Testimonials

Over the last five years I have edited more than 4,000 student-applicant essays and have dramatically increased the quality of their essays and odds of admission to their dream school. Don’t just take my word for it; read what some of my past clients had to say.

“Writing has never been my forte, so when it came time to write my personal statement for medical school applications I was stressed, my application was at a halt. A friend referred me to Brian Fobi for essay editing and I couldnʼt be happier with the result. Not only did his editing make my essay more organized and clear, it maintained my personal style and displayed my personality, which was very important to me. With Brianʼs help, I was able to overcome what I previously viewed as a barrier to my application, and make it a strength – an essay to be proud of. I would recommend Brianʼs essay service to anyone looking to present a polished personal statement to graduate school admissions committees.”
- Alison H.

“Thank you very much for every work you did on my essay! I was very amazed to see the quality of this service. I was a little skeptical before I tried, but now I am so certain that I will try again if I need to submit another. Thanks again!”
-Sayaka

“Brian, upgraded my personal statement from quite good to excellent. What is most important is that he make it express myself just as the way I want to while I did not. I hereby give my appreciation to Brian for your help on my graduate application.”
-Xiaoyu

“Thank you very much for everything.It is the second time I use your service and the quality is astonishing.I can’t find the words to thank you.My essay editor not only follow my instructions but improved my essay in an amazing way.I can’t believe it.Thank you.”
-Athanasios

“Brian did an outstanding job on my essays. He was able to convey what I tried to say way better than I ever imagined. I am so relieved and happy to have someone edit my essays so well. Thank you so much for an incredible job.”
-Spencer

” I was really impressed by how quickly Brian responded to my e-mails andgave me constant feedback throughout the editing process. His explanations wereclear and thoughtful. I cannot thank you enough.”
-Marek

“i am very satisfied with this service. my editor was very friendly and gave many constructive comments on my writing. many parts of my essay were significantly improved, and i will definitely incorporate a lot of the suggested changes into my essay. thanks! =)”
-Joe

“Brian did an excellent job. I will certainly ask him to edit my future essays.”
-Kyongho

“I felt that Brian did an excellent job working with my material given thetight time constraint. I am very satisfied with Brian’s attention and effort to meet my needs!”
-Donald

“The editing was very well done and I liked how the essay still sounded like my original but just flowed better. I especially like the comments that the editor made as to why he changed or kept certain parts of my essays. Thank you!”
-Carmen

“Excellent work in such a short time frame! Thanks you!”
-Cindy

“I was amazed to see such great changes to my essay. Not only did theeditor clean up my grammatical errors, but he took the time to explain in detailwhat he recommended for each paragraph. The essay looks very professional and flow very nicely.”
-Nicko

“I was very impressed with brian’s critique and thorough explanations. I couldnt be happier with the result i will definitely be a return customer and request Brian. i will recommend him as well he did an exceptional job. thanks Brian”
-Jacqueline

“This editor has ability to read the students mind and edit it to their preference. Excellent.”
-Ji Hye

“I was very pleased with my final essay. It was “my” essay, but better! What a difference these small changes made; such as eliminating the overuse of the passive voice and condensing the length of the essay. Thank you!!!”
-Linda

“I really enjoyed your ideas about my essay and how you edited it. Thanks a lot a lot!”
-Nelisha

“I am extremely satisfied with the critique of my editor. He did such a great job of getting the essay to flow. Thanks for the help!!”
-Tisa

“I was very impressed by the editor’s thoughtful comments and the quick turnaround time. The pricing is more than reasonable. Thank you very much!!”
-Deborah

” The quality of the editor was fantastic. I understand your services are professional and in the case of applying to med school it was worth the price”
-Zachary

“My editor really helped my essay a lot. It was more than I have thought. My essay became more coherent, fluent, smooth, and personal.!! Thank you so much.”
-Ryan

“My editor did a fantastic job and he had excellent editing skills. I realy apperciate him what he did my admmision essay.God bless him.”
-Teddy

“The edits were thorough and confirmed some of the doubts that I myself had about the essay. I know now that they must be changed. I was satisfied with my critique.”
-Victoria

“Brian helped me identify critical problems with my paper. I hope to use Brian in the future for additional work. Thank you for your time and efforts David.”
-David

“I am very impressed with the work of Brian who impoved my essay a lot. He made many important comments on general rules of grammar which I will certainly use for my future essays. I would like to contact him again when I have some other essays to edit.”
-Olga

“I love the edit because it polished my essay without changing much of my ideas.”
-Ho Fung

“Brian is very good, very patient, very helpful. He provided very useful advice.”
-Jack

“Thank you! Brian was the best editor among the editors I have used. I will always edit my essays through Brian.”
-Sung Ho

“Thank you very much!!! I am very much satisfied with my editor’s work. He splendidly changed a mere essay into a really vibrant essay. I was expecting just a fluency job from you, but he took the reconstruction of whole essay, which I needed most but couldn’t dare to request. He just made an essay what I really wanted to say! Thank you! I am very much satisfied.”
-Bernard

“I like that it was returned when promised. Also, I am very impressed with the finished product. I have had a difficult time with writing and whenever I ask someone to proof read my papers they will proof read and correct mistake. However, for the most part they can not tell me why I am having such a difficult time with writing. The critique that I received was so detailed and truly outlined the
mistakes and how I could correct them. I am so greatful for this service and I know I will return.”
-Evelyn

“The quality of response is superior. What I love most about Brian is that he is honest about his biases and tendencies. I have tried many editors before, and found Brian’s style to be the best. His critique not only improved my essay, but also my writing style for future essays. I am really thankful for such wonderful service!”
-Nawaf

” I received excellent service. The editor greatly improved my essay while keeping the theme I was trying to convey. I’ve been out of school for almost 6 years and the use of the service was a great refresher on how to write an effective and compelling essay. I am very satisfied with the product.”
-Patrick

“Brian has made a world of difference on my essay. I dont know how he did it, but he was able to put to paper thoughts and feelings I had wanted to, but couldn’t.”
-Jonathan

“The speed of service was great! I really needed a quick edit and I got it!”
-Robert

“I was writing an appeal to UC Berkeley. I was accepted but was unable to comply with my conditions of admission. My admission was cancelled as a result. It was a hard letter to write since I have to let them know that I take responsibility for my actions and am not making excuses. Brian really helped me. After reading my essay, he gave me a lot of insightful comments and dramatically improved myoriginal essay. I have heard from the school and I got in again. I want to say thank you!”
-Sherry

“The editor listened well to what I exactly wanted. My essay turned out to be a great one, and all my friends who casted a doubt when I told them I would send my essay to the website were utterly amazed by his work!! It was the best choice I ever made and again thank you so much!”
-Sun Young

“did an OUTSTANDING job! This service surpassed all my expectations. I really like how the editor kept all my original ideas and contents of my essay and only reorganized and reworded the essay (instead of just rewriting my essay). The essay still sounded like my own – only it was a more clearly written, more coherent representation of what I was trying to say, but just couldn’t “get out”. Great job. Thanks a million.”
-Suzanne

“Well worth the money! Will be showing some fellow students this site!”
-Ryan

“My editor worked on my essay very well. He brought out what I was trying to say in very effective words and that’s great!”
-Lauren